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初中英語(yǔ)作文記敘文寫(xiě)作技巧及其范文
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記敘文是記人敘事的文章,它主要是用于說(shuō)明事件的時(shí)間、背景、起因、過(guò)程及結(jié)果,即我們通常所說(shuō)的五個(gè)" W "( what, who, when, where, why )和一個(gè)" H "( how )。記敘文的重點(diǎn)在于"述說(shuō)"和"描寫(xiě)",因此一篇好的記敘文要敘述條理清楚,描寫(xiě)生動(dòng)形象。下面就談?wù)動(dòng)⒄Z(yǔ)記敘文的特點(diǎn)和寫(xiě)好記敘文的基本要領(lǐng)。
一、記敘文的特點(diǎn)
1. 敘述的人稱(chēng)
英語(yǔ)的記敘文一般是以第一或第三人稱(chēng)的角度來(lái)敘述的。用第一稱(chēng)表示的是由敘述者親眼所見(jiàn)、親耳所聞的經(jīng)歷。它的優(yōu)點(diǎn)在于能把故事的情節(jié)通過(guò)"我"來(lái)傳達(dá)給讀者,使人讀后感到真實(shí)可信,如身臨其境。如:
The other day, I was driving along the street. Suddenly, a car lost its control and ran directly towards me fast. I was so frightened that I quickly turned to the left side. But it was too late. The car hit my bike and I fell off it.
用第三人稱(chēng)敘述,優(yōu)點(diǎn)在于敘述者不受"我"活動(dòng)范圍以?xún)?nèi)的人和事物的限制,而是通過(guò)作者與讀者之外的第三者,直接把故事中的情節(jié)展現(xiàn)在讀者面前,文章的客觀性很強(qiáng)。如:
Little Tom was going to school with an umbrella, for it was raining hard. On the way, he saw an old woman walking in the rain with nothing to cover. Tom went up to the old woman and wanted to share the umbrella with her, but he was too short. What could he do? Then he had a good idea.
2. 動(dòng)詞的時(shí)態(tài)
在記敘文中,記和敘都離不開(kāi)動(dòng)詞。所以動(dòng)詞出現(xiàn)率最高,且富于變化。記敘文中用得最多的是動(dòng)詞的過(guò)去的,這是英語(yǔ)記敘文區(qū)別于漢語(yǔ)記敘文的關(guān)鍵之處。英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作的優(yōu)美之處就在于這些動(dòng)詞時(shí)態(tài)的變化,正是這一點(diǎn)才使得所記、所敘有鮮活的動(dòng)態(tài)感、鮮明的層次感和立體感。
3. 敘述的順序
記敘一件事要有一定的順序。無(wú)論是順敘、倒敘、插敘還是補(bǔ)敘,都要讓讀者能弄清事情的來(lái)龍去脈。順敘最容易操作,較容易給讀者提供有關(guān)事情的空間和時(shí)間線(xiàn)索。但這種方法也容易使文章顯得平鋪直敘,讀起來(lái)平淡乏味。倒敘、插敘、補(bǔ)敘等敘述方法能有效地提高文章的結(jié)構(gòu)效果,讓所敘之事跌宕起伏,使讀者在閱讀時(shí)思維產(chǎn)生較大的跳躍,從而為文章所吸引,深入其中。但這些方法如果使用不當(dāng),則容易弄巧成拙,使文章結(jié)構(gòu)散亂,頭緒不清,讓讀者不知所云。
4. 敘述的過(guò)渡
過(guò)渡在上下文中起著承上啟下、融會(huì)貫通的作用。過(guò)渡往往用在地點(diǎn)轉(zhuǎn)移或時(shí)間、事件轉(zhuǎn)換以及由概括說(shuō)明到具體敘述時(shí)。如:
In my summer holidays, I did a lot of things. Apart form doing my homework, reading an English novel, watching TV and doing some housework, I went on a trip to Qingdao. It is really a beautiful city. There are many places of interest to see. But what impressed me most was the sunrise.
The next morning I got up early. I was very happy because it was a fine day. By the time I got to the beach, the clouds on the horizon were turning red. In a little while, a small part of the sun was gradually appearing. The sun was very red, not shining. It rose slowly. At last it broke through the red clouds and jumped above the sea, just like a deep-red ball. At the same time the clouds and the sea water became red and bright.
What a moving and unforgettable scene!
5. 敘述與對(duì)話(huà)
引用故事情節(jié)中主要人物的對(duì)話(huà)是記敘文提高表現(xiàn)力的一種好方法。適當(dāng)?shù)赜弥苯右Z(yǔ)代替間接的主觀敘述,可以客觀生動(dòng)地反映人物的性格、品質(zhì)和心理狀態(tài),使記敘生動(dòng)、有趣,使文章內(nèi)容更加充實(shí)、具體。試比較下面兩段的敘述效果: (
I was in the kitchen, and I was cooking something. Suddenly I heard a loud noise from the front. I thought maybe someone was knocking the door. I asked who it was but I heard no reply. After a while I saw my cat running across the parlor. I realized it was the cat. I felt released.
這本來(lái)應(yīng)是一段故事性很強(qiáng)的文字,但經(jīng)作者這么一寫(xiě),就不那么吸引人了。原因是文中用的都是敘述模式,沒(méi)有人物語(yǔ)言,把"懸念"給沖淡了。可作如下調(diào)整:
I was in the kitchen cooking something. "Crash!" a loud noise came from the front. Thinking someone was knocking at the door, I asked, "Who?" No reply. After a while, I saw my cat running across the parlor. "It's you." I said, quite released.
二、寫(xiě)好記敘文的基本要領(lǐng)
1. 頭緒分明,脈絡(luò)清楚
寫(xiě)好記敘文,首先要頭緒分明,脈絡(luò)清楚,明確文章要求寫(xiě)什么。要對(duì)所寫(xiě)的事件或人物進(jìn)行分析,弄清事件發(fā)生、發(fā)展一直到結(jié)束的整個(gè)過(guò)程,然后再選取素材。這些素材都應(yīng)該跟上述五個(gè)" W "和一個(gè)" H "有關(guān)。盡管不是每篇記敘文里都必須包括這些" W "和" H ",但動(dòng)筆之前,圍繞五個(gè)" W "和" H "進(jìn)行構(gòu)思是必不可少的。 集整理
2. 突出中心,詳略得當(dāng)
在文章的框架確定后,對(duì)支持故事的素材的選取是很關(guān)鍵的。選材要注意取舍,應(yīng)該從表現(xiàn)文章主題的需要出發(fā),分清主次,定好詳略。要突出重點(diǎn),詳寫(xiě)細(xì)述那些能表現(xiàn)文章主題的重要情節(jié),略寫(xiě)粗述那么非關(guān)鍵的次要情節(jié)。面面俱到反而使情節(jié)羅列化,使人不得要領(lǐng)。這一點(diǎn)是寫(xiě)好記敘文要解決的一個(gè)基本問(wèn)題,也需要一定的技巧。如:
One night a man came to our house and told me, "There is a family with eight children. They have not eaten for days." I took some food with me and went.
When I finally came to that family, I saw the faces of those little children disfigured (破壞外貌) by hunger. There was no sorrow or sadness in their faces, just the deep pain of hunger.
話(huà)題作文寫(xiě)作模板
中考英語(yǔ)考前必備--話(huà)題作文寫(xiě)作模板
Nowadays, there are more and more (某種現(xiàn)象) in (某種場(chǎng)合). It is estimated that (相關(guān)數(shù)據(jù)). Why have there been so many (某種現(xiàn)象)? Maybe the reasons can be listed as follows. The first one is (原因一). Besides, (原因二). The third one is (原因三). To sum up, the main cause of (某種現(xiàn)象) is due to (最主要原因). It is high time that something were done upon it. For one thing, (解決辦法一). On the other hand, (解決辦法二). All these measures will certainly reduce the number of (某種現(xiàn)象).
利弊型作文寫(xiě)作模板
這種題型往往要求先說(shuō)明一下現(xiàn)狀,再對(duì)比事物本身的利弊,有時(shí)也會(huì)單從一個(gè)角度(利或弊)出發(fā),最后往往要求考生表明自己的態(tài)度(或?qū)κ挛锴熬疤岢鲱A(yù)測(cè))
1. 說(shuō)明事物現(xiàn)狀
2. 事物本身的優(yōu)缺點(diǎn)(或一方面)
3. 你對(duì)現(xiàn)狀(或前景)的看法
Nowadays many people prefer A because it has a significant role in our daily life. Generally, its advantages can be seen as follows. First ---------------(A的優(yōu)點(diǎn)之一). Besides -------------------(A的優(yōu)點(diǎn)之二).
But every coin has two sides. The negative aspects are also apparent. One of the important disadvantages is that ----------------(A的第一個(gè)缺點(diǎn)).To make matters worse,------------------(A的第二個(gè)缺點(diǎn)).
Through the above analysis, I believe that the positive aspects overweigh the negative ones. Therefore, I would like to ---------------(我的看法).
(From the comparison between these positive and negative effects of A, we should take it reasonably and do it according to the circumstances we are in. Only by this way, ---------------(對(duì)前景的預(yù)測(cè)).)
英語(yǔ)旅游日記
我是一個(gè)美國(guó)學(xué)生,來(lái)中國(guó)旅游,去了長(zhǎng)城、天安門(mén)等地方,詞數(shù)不少于60個(gè),注意要用過(guò)去式,開(kāi)頭已給出:
Wednesday,August 2nd
It was a fine day!
[范文]
It was a fine day! I went to several places of interest such as the Great Wall and Tiananmen square.I was amazed by China's historical background and the industrious Chinese people who built the Great Wall. People are very friendly here. I was greeted by amiable people who were nice enough to tell me about the history of China and by modest students who later practiced speaking English with me. China has left me a wonderful impression and I look forward to come back here for the Olympics.
解決方法型作文寫(xiě)作模板
要求考生列舉出解決問(wèn)題的多種途徑:
1.問(wèn)題現(xiàn)狀
2.怎樣解決(解決方案的優(yōu)缺點(diǎn))
In recent days, we have to face I problem-----A, which is becoming more and more serious. First, ------------(說(shuō)明A的現(xiàn)狀).Second, ---------------(舉例進(jìn)一步說(shuō)明現(xiàn)狀) Confronted with A, we should take a series of effective measures to cope with the situation. For one thing, ---------------(解決方法一). For another -------------(解決方法二). Finally, --------------(解決方法三). Personally, I believe that -------------(我的解決方法). Consequently, I'm confident that a bright future is awaiting us because --------------(帶來(lái)的好處).
闡述主題型作文寫(xiě)作模板
要求從一句話(huà)或一個(gè)主題出發(fā),按照提綱的要求進(jìn)行論述.
1. 闡述名言或主題所蘊(yùn)涵的意義.
2. 分析并舉例使其更充實(shí).
The good old proverb ----------------(名言或諺語(yǔ))reminds us that ---------------(釋義). Indeed, we can learn many things form it. First of all,-----------------(理由一). For example, -------------------(舉例說(shuō)明). Secondly,----------------(理由二). Another case is that ---------------(舉例說(shuō)明). Furthermore , ------------------(理由三).
In my opinion, ----------------(我的觀點(diǎn)). In short, whatever you do, please remember the say------A. If you understand it and apply it to your study or work, you"ll necessarily benefit a lot from it.
對(duì)比觀點(diǎn)型作文寫(xiě)作模板
1) 要求論述兩個(gè)對(duì)立的觀點(diǎn)并給出自己的看法。
1.有一些人認(rèn)為。。。 2.另一些人認(rèn)為。。。3.我的看法。。。
The topic of ①-----------------(主題)is becoming more and more popular recently. There are two sides of opinions of it. Some people say A is heir favorite. They hold their view for the reason of②-----------------(支持A的理由一)What is more, ③-------------理由二). Moreover,④---------------(理由三).
While others think that B is a better choice in the following three reasons. Firstly,-----------------(支持B的理由一). Secondly (besides),⑥------------------(理由二). Thirdly (finally),⑦------------------(理由三).
From my point of view, I think ⑧----------------(我的觀點(diǎn)). The reason is that⑨--------------------(原因). As a matter of fact, there are some other reasons to explain my choice. For me, the former is surely a wise choice .
2) 給出一個(gè)觀點(diǎn),要求考生反對(duì)這一觀點(diǎn)
Some people believe that ①----------------(觀點(diǎn)一). For example, they think②-----------------(舉例說(shuō)明).And it will bring them③-----------------(為他們帶來(lái)的好處). In my opinion, I never think this reason can be the point. For one thing,④-------------(我不同意該看法的理由一). For another thing,⑤-----------------(反對(duì)的理由之二). Form all what I have said, I agree to the thought that⑥------------------(我對(duì)文章所討論主題的看法).
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